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Want to know what defines a thriller and what thriller publishers are looking for?

Taylor077.jpgTaylor told the tale at at the Pasco/NPR 2d Annual Writer's Conference at the New Port Richey Florida Public Library on Sunday, April 6, 2008  for his "Mayhem, Murder, or just a bit of Mischief – Let’s Write a Thriller" interactive workshop.

Need tips on how to develop intriguing characters and exotic settings, keeping track of the gun on the mantel, if the romantic interest has blond or black hair and speaks with a Jersey accent, and did the terrorist attack take place on Monday morning or Sunday night? How do you keep the reader’s attention with what at first appear to be mundane characters and familiar settings? Concerned with keeping up the pace? This interactive workshop will provide tips that answer these questions and address the essential elements of writing an exciting thriller.


Friends join Taylor at EPICon2008 in Portland for his "Mayhem, Murder, or just a bit of Mischief – Let’s Write a Thriller" interactive workshop.

Want to know what defines a thriller and what thriller publishers are looking for? Need tips on how to develop intriguing characters and exotic settings, keeping track of the gun on the mantel, if the romantic interest has blond or black hair and speaks with a Jersey accent, and did the terrorist attack take place on Monday morning or Sunday night? How do you keep the reader’s attention with what at first appear to be mundane characters and familiar settings? Concerned with keeping up the pace? This interactive workshop will provide tips that answer these questions and address the essential elements of writing an exciting thriller.

On Taylor's left, David McBain, military intelligence expert and husband of Ginny McBain, Award Winning author. On Taylor's right is Marilyn Meredith, EPPIE winner, and her husband.


Saturday, April 8, 2006, Mystery Writing Workshop with the Young Mystery Writers of East Pasco. An imaginative off-shoot of the Florida Writers Association generated by the efforts of Tracy Akers, the workshop meets at the New River Academy, 4210 Ernest Dr. in Wesley Chapel, Florida. Attendance was sparse, but the story line was great:  Matilda, stuck at her great-aunt's farm in the middle of nowhere Oklahoma, hears that her best friend, Eddie, has been kidnapped. And on from there.

Wednesday, November 16th, 2005 at 7 pm: USF Lifelong Writers - Taylor will present a pocket version of his workshop "Where to Now – Action Plots that Make Movies" at the Lifelong Writers monthly meeting. Click here for more information.

 


April, 2005 was a “back to school” month for me.

“Volunteered” by a fellow writer, I found myself at Dunedin High School in the company of a mayor, councilmen, members of the Sons of the Revolution, retired and active teachers, and folks of many other ilks; all gathered to judge entries in the Pinellas County High School History Fair. Alan Kay, author of a highly acclaimed series of young adult historical novels, coordinated the activities as part of National History Day, turning apparent mayhem into a well-organized assembly of eager student competitors and wide-eyed judges. The Fair exuded all the tension of a Super Bowl, with the top placers moving on to the State competition!

To start with, I didn’t know such a thing existed. Turns out the bulk of the Fair was a series of displays - you know, the historical equivalent of erupting volcanoes. The theme was communications, so the exhibits ranged from secret communications by spies to the use of morse code to the development of modern telecommunications.

Fortunately, Alan didn’t sign me up for the exhibit judging - since I am part of communications history, being a retired Army Signal Corps soldier. Instead I had the privilege of judging written papers - essays in all but one case. The great aspect was that they were all well written and interesting. The tough aspect was that the judges had to pick winners - and, by definition -
non-winners.

Believe me, there were no losers!

One paper recounted the history of the passenger pigeon in wartime, from the Prussian siege of Paris in 1870 to the trenches of the World War; another recounted the astonishing feats of the Peale family of artists who painted the portraits we all recognize daily of Washington, Jefferson and other greats dignitaries of our Nation. An engaging fictionalized memoir of Sacajawea, the Shoshone Indian woman translator for the Lewis and Clark expedition, was so well written as to suggest a level of authenticity rivaling the expedition journals.

Reviewing these papers was a reminder of the fruits of research, the subject of several articles this issue. The major criteria for judging scores were the source, accuracy, and documentation of references, both primary and secondary. If you write nonfiction and don’t know the difference, you need to do some research!

Next up was MURDER!

My questionable friend and fellow TWA member, Lucy Parker, hooked me up with Terry Sollazzo from Wharton High, who is also President of the Florida Scholastic Press Association. I found myself at the Association State Convention and Competition at the Tampa Hyatt in the midst of bustling interviewers and interviewees, interchangeable every few minutes, complete with video cameras and notepads, competitive journalism hard at work.

I presented two workshops - “IT'S A MYSTERY: The Fundaments of CPSS - Character, Plot, Setting and Style in Writing Fiction” and “WHICH WAY NOW: Action Plots that Make Exciting Movies” as a bit of a change of pace for the student (and very professional) journalists. Both faculty and student members attended the workshops where we had chance to create a mystery.

The next workshop included outlining and the usefulness of the Syd Field screenwriting paradigm in plot development.

Two different and grand days. All a reminder the more you can share with our future writers, the better subsequent generations will be led, informed and entertained.

Give a little bit - you always get more in return.


At each of the Children's workshops the kids developed characters settings and plots for their own mysteries. Click on the Mystery Plots to sample some of their creativity.

April 28, 2004, Valrico Elementary School, Valrico, Florida. V. I. P. Showcase

2003 St Petersburg Times Festival of Reading
Children's' Mystery Writing Workshop

May 23, 2003 "Write A Mystery Workshop" for Kids Ages 8-12 will kickoff the Carrollwood Barnes & Noble Booksellers Summer Reading Program.

NEWS RELEASE

Everyone else is stymied. The crime is too terrible, the clues misleading.

Only:

You rule!

Create suspicious characters doing dangerous things in spooky places, full of magical and strange animals, sorcerers and talking statues. Or maybe your detectives are just regular kids caught in crazy situations. In the Mystery Writing Workshop you can write your own story where your detectives uncover and use clues to solve your mystery.


UNHCR and Iraq - and a Mystery Workshop

April 7, 2003 - Carrollwood Day School Writer's Conference, Tampa, FL
J. M. Taylor will be a guest at the Carrollwood Day School's writer's conference, discussing the UN High commission or Refugees  and Iraq with the students who recently completed a UNHCR project, and also presenting a Mystery Writing Workshop.

After Action Report:

The older guys and gal talked about adventure stories and what books they like best, and listened too politely as I read. I though I was just boring them, but their teach said they had been told not to run over me. The younger kids listened to the Mystery of the Missing Mice and discovered the elements that make up a mystery, then made up their own mystery.


St Petersburg Main Library, September 6, 2003. "Write your novel so it reads like a blockbuster Hollywood movie!"

Interested in writing an action/adventure novel that is screenplay-ready? Characters, setting and style are all important, but Taylor will focus this workshop on plotting techniques that will keep your characters and settings organized for a non-stop action plot. Taylor has applied these techniques to his completed novels, Behind the Green Water and A Flash of Emerald, that led to reviews such as the following by Midwest Book Review:

"J. M. Taylor's A Flash Of Emerald is a gripping action/adventure novel of Harry Stoner, a military man who has come home to a personal battle in the dark underside of Tampa's Ybor City and the Florida Keys. International arms dealers and murderous terrorists jockey for possession of a stolen nuclear weapon in this suspense-filled story that simply cannot be put down from first page to last. Attention Hollywood, Flash Of Emerald is the stuff of which great action/adventure movies are made!"

As a bonus, you can register to win a free download of SceneWriter Pro, the new software package from Virtual Amnesia which incorporates the outlining and plotting techniques presented in the workshop.

This presentation is one of a public series presented by the St Petersburg Library. Join Taylor 2:00 p.m., Saturday, September 6, 2003, at the St Petersburg Main Library, 280 5th Street North, St. Petersburg, FL 33701. Call for more information at 727-893-7318.

Attendee Comments:

Hi Mr. Taylor

Just a reply to thank you for the workshop on Saturday, 9/6/03. I left with some valuable information and an increased appreciation of just how special writers are. I also visited your website, was interested in your thoughts on independent and e-publishing; I would have liked to hear more about that in the workshop, but realize that was not the topic. I haven't really thought that far in advance; just getting the words down on paper (or computer screen) is a victory for me, and I guess I'm one of those people who still like the actual feel of a bound book in my hands when I'm reading, but it certainly seems to be our future, doesn't it?

I have added your books to my "must read" list. I'm not a regular action thriller reader, but I like to sample as much as I can. I go more for the murder mystery, particularly in the Ruth Rendell style, and have been concentrating on this with my writing. I suspect I was a bit over my head on Saturday in the company of those who seem to have a good deal more experience with this craft, but it only fuels my desire to keep on writing and hopefully one day I can count myself among the published authors like yourself. Even if that doesn't happen, I don't think I will have wasted my time as I am doing something I love.

I am one of the winners of the Virtual Amnesia software. They did contact me and I've already downloaded and had some fun with it. Thanks for notifying them.

A soon-to-be devoted fan,

St. Petersburg, FL

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